Tuesday, 2 April 2013

Boring Sentence Activity

For writing we are given a boring sentence and we have to make make the boring sentence into an intereating descriptive piece of writing.

'I was walking along a path'

I am walking along a old cracked path.Beside me I can see beautiful flowers blooming on the chocolate                          coloured branches.The smell of bushes and trees circle me like im trapped in a tiny box.I can hear the  sound of noisey bird tweeting to his very quite friend.I can taste saur flavours in the air.           

BY EMMA

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